Sunday May 23rd 2010, 11:40 pm
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I have SO much to do to revise my paper.

I really have to “synthesize” (love that diction choice) all of the information I have collected and really clear up exactly what my claims are, as well as finalizing my thesis and really delving into my motive.
Those worksheets are coming in very handy as I have been revising away.
Your thesis is interesting, but I think the second part of it should be more specific. I really need to offer a clearer explanation as to what the plays are offering when it comes to dreams. I think I can sum it up in this way: dreams are used to communicate events and feelings that cannot be collectively experienced through realism. I think the more I come back to that claim, the more focused my paper will become. But it is getting there!

I am still working on structuring my argument and finding a place for all of my evidence. I am having a lot of fun figuring this all out. Really, I don’t remember the last time I have felt so passionately (accidentally) about a paper.

Off to continue to write!

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